User:Advythr/Pleistocene megafauna/Hzara002 Peer Review

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 * Pleistocene megafauna
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Contrasting Africa's losses with North America needs some citiatins.

Effects and causes by continent section has africa empty unsure if this was done purposely looks like it was duplicated.