User:Aed761/sandbox/Predator Satiation/aed761 Peer Review

General info
Reviewing draft by Abeththorne. Link to review User:Abeththorne/sandbox

Lead
n/a

Content
Good ideas, since they are discussed on the talk page as things that should be discussed, But otherwise n/a

Tone and Balance
tone is neutral in the current wikipedia article. balance n/a until sections are added

Sources and References
n/a

Organization
n/a

Images and Media
none

Overall impressions
Overall just a few lines discussing what you will be doing, I would recommend making a bulkier draft since the final article is due Nov 17th (as I should also do).