User:Aemoe85/State violence/FrozenFrosch Peer Review

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Aemoe85, Skyjay999, BeklchingFox
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Aemoe85/State violence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):State violence

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am SUPER interested in how this one turns out. but I like where it is set to go so far. I think the focus by Aemoe85 on Colonialism, Police Brutality and Immigration Policy are all super interesting areas to focus on.

I am extremely interested to see how the "Violence against indigenous women in the US" section ends up turning out; particularly as there is a lot of interplay in that section between explicit state violence, state sanctioned violence, violence enacted by workers upon Indigenous women, and a large history of blatant erasure of the issue itself. I think it's an issue that often goes under-reported & acknowledged, so I am glad that they are hoping to cover it in this piece!

I appreciate your feedback. I chose "violence against indigenous women in the US" to write about because I think it captures how state violence, settler colonialism, and gendered violence are all intertwined. - Aemoe85

Thank you for you feedback. I chose to focus on immigration policy because as we have seen in our modules policies can create a state of violence. Status is a prime example of why I chose this topic.-Skyjay999