User:Aeo7703/Caligo telamonius/KinsleyD Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aeo7703


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aeo7703/Caligo_telamonius?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caligo telamonius

Evaluate the drafted changes
Review by KinsleyD

First off, the butterfly you have chosen is really beautiful, and I can see why it would be an interesting species to research. I wanted to get this review out early so you could make changes as you needed to.

-       Using C. telamonius instead of the full name throughout the article is a great choice, maybe throw in its common name every once in awhile so its species name doesn’t feel overused.

-       Try breaking up your main paragraph into different sections: physical description, distribution, and maybe have a separate section dedicated to Wolbachia.

[Maybe look into articles on characteristics and behaviors to balance out the bacteria section]

-      Your bibliography seemed to cover some life cycle topics and diversity, maybe incorporate those in another section, too.

-       I’d recommend inserting a template for taxonomy called “taxobox” (it provides a table like other species pages on Wikipedia).

[click the “Insert” drop-down menu at the top then click “Template”]

-       You can also try inserting images straight from Wikimedia onto your page by clicking “Insert” then “Images and media” and then typing in your species name or common name.

[Adding images provides visualization representation of what you may be describing, maybe the butterfly's coloration and pattern.]

-       Don’t forget to italicize species and genus names; you can manually style it or press ctrl+i on the keyboard.

-       You can also link to other Wikipedia pages by placing your cursor beside a word (ex. Wolbachia) and pressing the link symbol at the top or ctrl+k on the keyboard. Providing links means you don’t have to explicitly explain what something is – if someone wants to know more about Wolbachia, for instance, they can click on the highlighted link.

-       For the sub-headings you already have: “Lead,” “Article body,” and “References,” changing them to a heading on the “format paragraph” drop-down menu will also give your page a cleaner look.

-      If you need more articles, maybe try researching other species that mention yours in the abstract or conclusion; articles are sometimes published covering the overarching genus.

This species has a lot of potential, good luck!