User:Aeo7703/Caligo telamonius/Mtav7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ae07703


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aeo7703/Caligo_telamonius?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot of quality information included and there is a good amount of sources for the length of the article. I think it could be beneficial to split the article into distinct paragraphs to help with organization. For example, there could be a description paragraph, parasite paragraph, and habitat paragraph. In these paragraphs you could expand upon the ideas you already have and include the more sources.

The content is solid, but I think sentence structure, diction, and flow could all be improved. Many sentences are short and abrupt, and there isn't a clear train of thought. If the sentences flowed together more, the article would read better and be more interesting for the reader.

This article appears incomplete but has a great start. I think once your main points are more comprehensive, this will be a great article!