User:Aerynsmith/Medical racism in the United States/Aprilfarrah10 Peer Review

After throughly reading through the wiki page before the students edit and now after reading through the additional work going to be inputted I believe my classmate did a fantastic job finding creditable sources and perspective from present day people about this topic. I think her sentence structures is great I have no real feedback about it. Maybe (if this is possible) I think you could indent the sentences starting with the quotes from the peoples perspectives. In general, I think this classmate's work on the topic of Medical Racism in the United States is going very well!

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