User:Aerynsmith/Medical racism in the United States/Gymshark4321 Peer Review

General info
User:Aerynsmith
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aerynsmith/Medical racism in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medical racism in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- Although the lead has not been updated, I believe that a sentence in the lead can be added about socioeconomic status, so it helps give an overview on how such status promotes medical differences.

- The lead does includes both an introductory and brief description of the articles major sections, besides the one added by the editor.

- The lead contains concise information and is not overly detailed.

Content

- All the content added is relevant to the topic and does an excellent job on describing how the socioeconomic status creates medical disparities. Also, all the information added is up to date, however, in the paragraph when you mention about "a recent study" I would recommend adding the year that study was conducted so its more efficient for the reader to know rather than having to scroll all the way at the bottom to look up the citation.

- The added content does address topics related to historically underrepresented groups and equity gaps.

Tone and Balance

- All the content that is added appears to be neutral and does not favor one viewpoint over another.

Sources and References

- All the new content is backed up by a secondary reliable source and the content does reflect with the sources cited.

- Also, all the sources provided have links that work and none of the sources are outdated, as they are recent.

Organization

- The content added is very well written and concise with the articles main topic. There are limited grammatical errors presented in the content added by the editor. Also the content added, merges right in with the articles topic, and I really love how you included another section focusing just on socioeconomic status as its one of the prominent factors that leads with medical differences among groups.

Overall impression

- You did an excellent job with the content that you added!

- I believe that everything is well fitted and no additional changes need to be made that I think of besides that small change I mentioned.