User:Afamiliarface/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:All Apologies

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this because i think the band Nirvana is underrated and should be appreciated more. My first initial expression i got from the article was that it was poorly done and had foul words.

Evaluate the article
This article gave me the impression that it wasn’t properly thought out and executed. Firstly, there is no ‘lead section’ in this article. This article actually starts off with the fact that this album sounds like a whole different song when it’s actually supposed to be talking about the album itself. There isn’t anything introductory about the article, and it doesn’t explain what the album is about. A lot of content is missing and i feel like they shouldn’t have brought up a different song or at least made that section smaller. This article states in the first topic about how they specifically think Kurt’s music is based off someone else’s. I feel like Kurt’s viewpoint on his own music is very underrepresented in this article, and how in the article there’s things that are being said but there’s nothing really about Kurt or his album. As for sources, there aren’t a lot of sources but there are some and these sources sadly confuse me, because they either send me to something I’m confused about or they send me to a page that has a photo to show.the organization and writing of this article is confusing. There’s cuss words and a copy write topic. It’s not fairly clear throughout the whole thing. The talk page only talks about the cover of the article being removed and that’s about it but i feel like we can discuss more. I feel like the articles overall needs some serious work done to make it easier to comprehend. I also feel like it needs more about the album and not about another song. I feel like other peoples impressions of this albums should be included in the article in the talk page most likely.