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Content:
-unclear opening to the article-- what is the phenomenon of "distributed researching?"

-despite efforts to clarify this point throughout the article, it remains unclear whether the HFSE is search "of" or "by" "human flesh"

--> perhaps an expansion of the page's "Etymology" section would clarify this point

-in the "Notable Examples" section, an example is given of an incident which took place in America-- the replacement of a "He Will Not Divide Us" flag with a MAGA flag; given that the rest of the article suggests that the HFSE is a strictly Chinese phenomenon/device, this example is confusing and unilluminating

Tone:
-there is a line in the "History" section which reads:

"The Baojia system of community rule-of-law in ancient China bears strong similarities with human flesh search. Both are based on some form of vigilantism."

To me, this line seems to represent an instance of individual interpretation/analysis by the author. It is not cited and there is no empirical proof offered in its support.

-in general, there are a number of sentences which seem awkward and ought to be rephrased

Sources:
-list of sources seems fairly reputable/robust, except for the fact that 3 of the 12 are for the He Will Not Divide Us Incident, which seems questionably relevant

-in general sources are from academic work, which is theoretically unbiased

-links to sources work, but some may not be cited correctly (source referred to as just Lagerkvist which links to a Google Book)

-the notable examples section is flagged by Wikipedia for not citing enough sources

Talk Page:
-belongs to WikiProjects China, Internet Culture, Internet, and Sociology

-there was significant discussion of whether the article should be combined with the article on doxing, and listed as a country-specific instance of doxing

-talk page also commented on some of the vague word choice throughout the article, like “cyber violence” and “distributed researching”

-the issue of the relevancy of the He Will Not Divide Us example was raised; someone proposed that this specific section of the article should be moved to the doxing page

Article Selection
''' Note: My final article selection list is Food Libel Laws, Dragonfly (search engine), and Southern Weekly Incident. '''

Censorship in Taiwan
This article needs its "History" and "Cross-Strait Relations" subpages to be expanded. I want to introduce more sources/information in those sections.

Corporate Censorship
This article is rambling and lacks structure. I would want to revise it so that it is structured by type of censorship, rather than industry, as it is currently. I also want to add more information about anti-disparagement agreements, and how companies leverage those to protect their images.

Food Libel Laws
I would want to update this article, as it hasn't been revised since 2013, and there are certainly more cases to add/discuss. I would also want to explore how food libel laws are linked to censorship; this topic is explored only briefly in a graphic to the side of the page.

Communication Ethics
This article has very little information, and only 10 sources. With my revisions, I would hope to structure the article more, by introducing two clear sections: 1) examples of ethical debates in the communication realm and 2) theoretical frameworks for communication ethics. I want to incorporate academic sources, as well as sources directly from corporations/involved parties, i.e. doctrines regarding fair communication. This article also has almost no links to other articles, so I would hope to identify areas of overlap with other articles and modify this article accordingly.

Drafting Contribution to Food Libel Laws
LINK TO SPECIFIC SANDBOX FOR THIS ARTICLE: User:Afgmcdonald/foodlibelsandbox

Drafting Contribution to Project Dragonfly
LINK TO SPECIFIC SANDBOX FOR THIS ARTICLE: User:Afgmcdonald/dragonflysandbox

Drafting Contribution to Southern Weekly Incident
LINK TO SPECIFIC SANDBOX FOR THIS ARTICLE: User:Afgmcdonald/sandbox/southernweekly