User:Afiaetonam/Maria Rodriguez Denton/Rz2345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

afiaetonam


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Afiaetonam/Maria Rodriguez Denton/
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Seems fine. Concise enough.

Content:

Content seems to be recent. Given in a neutral tone. The article is a bit sparse, however. I'm unsure if this person necessarily warrants a wikipedia article (does not necessarily meet notability requirements).

Sources:

Would like to see a hyperlink to source for biographical information. At the moment, there isn't a source for all of it. The two sources given seem current and relevant.

General impressions:Needs more content, I think.