User:Afitz7/Abuse during childbirth/Tong.sa-24 Peer Review

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Afitz7


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 * Abuse during childbirth
 * Abuse during childbirth

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- The same phrase was used in the first paragraph of the "Epidemiology" section and the "Consequences" section

- Maybe a few more locations could be added to the "Geography" section, but it depends on what resources are available of course

- Maybe link some of the terms in the "Definitions and forms of abuse" section, like "caesarean section" and "sterilization"

- Overall, there's a good amount of content to the article so far! Nice work