User:Afk2231/Quantum machine learning/AsherJ22 Peer Review

General info

 * Afk2231
 * User:Afk2231/Quantum machine learning

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Could be more in depth.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * It is relevant and also brought in a new section.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * Brings in a new topic about the skepticism of quantum machine learning which was not previously addressed in the quantum machine learning wiki page.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * The first source is not so reliable/resourceful. It is from a .com and is not a scientific article. The quotes that you added on your sandbox are quotes from that article. You should try finding scientific article to back up what those people were saying.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Partially. Again, there are quotes from three people saying it is hard.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * There needs to be more research from more articles, especially need to find scientific articles.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * In a way.

Now that i think about it, the section about skepticism as a whole is not a neutral section to have.

Sources and References
Again, I do not think that there are enough sources to only use ones from non-scientific journals.

Organization
Why are there so many things crossed out? Did not even finish a few sentences.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

NA

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does not meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements

Overall impressions
I think that there are interesting sections in the Quantum Machine Learning wiki page that could definitely be added to as there are some sections that are just short paragraphs.