User:Afletc23/Monarchy/RadicalPizza Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Afletc23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Afletc23/Monarchy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monarchy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Language is clear, and points are detailed.
 * There is an extensive, neutral bibliography.
 * Nothing in the "Titles of monarchs" section has been cited.