User:Afm023/Nonverbal communication/Jordneu03 Peer Review

General info
Afm023
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Afm023/Nonverbal communication
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nonverbal communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
I have read and reviewed the article on "Nonverbal Communication" by Afm023. The article consists of a section on vocalics in nonverbal communication. In the draft, it is very well-done body. I do find that in the article can be expanded more how how nonverbal communication is very important. I also find that, the infant section is a bit short and feel like it could be expanded more and with more details. As infants have five stages of vocal development. I think explaining them and giving examples would help expand on the infant section more would get the reader to understand.

Overall, I think this article is great information that could be beneficial to add to the Nonverbal Communication article. I would say to go back and add little more details to make the article expand more. The article was easy to understand and read.