User:Afm023/Nonverbal communication/Mdg076 Peer Review

General info
Amfo23
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Afm023/Nonverbal communication:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nonverbal communication:

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like where you are going with the topic you have chosen for this assignment. Including examples in your draft is a great way to help your audience understand where you are coming from. The links to your references all worked for me, but there is some red showing on the page I believe due to the date. Your introduction sentence was clearly written and a very good opening in my opinion. I think adding a little more information to your second paragraph would be a great way to expand more on the topic of babies and their vocalics. I also think it will provide a better look for your page making the paragraph bigger. Overall I really enjoyed peer reviewing your article!