User:Aford4706/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Schizotypal personality disorder

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I think that personality disordered, especially that of Cluster A are highly underrepresented and more information needs to become available about them.

Evaluate the article

 * More information could be included in the the lead about the history of how this disorder came to be defined, such as including information about the first DSM it appeared in. This information could also be all moved to a different subheading of "history".
 * The lead explains a lot about behavior of this disorder, without clearly outlining what the rest of the article with articulate.
 * Citation 22 is dated. The updated and final edit of the work is no longer widely accessible (this citation is to the updated work).
 * Several other citations (12, 33, 35, 38, etc.) link to work that is not widely accessible.
 * Citation 2 has no links to information.
 * Link needed to Tourette syndrome.
 * Citation 37's content should be backed up with additional findings.
 * The articles seem to include information that is up to date.
 * Millon's work is overrepresented in the article.
 * The article is neutral in tone and maintains a good flow of information.
 * The article lacks images/media.
 * The article is concise, however, there are some grammatical improvements that could be made throughout.
 * Much of the discussion in the Talk section is related to issues with the links, as I have addressed above.
 * A common theme in the Talk section is the need for support/connections between points made Overall, I think the article is a good framework that can and needs to be expanded upon. It does a thorough job describing many of the facets of STPD, but there is more and new research information that needed to be included.