User:Aford4706/Schizotypal personality disorder/Snqadri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aford4706


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aford4706/Schizotypal personality disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizotypal personality disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the idea of adding a history sub-heading to your article as it can really help with fleshing out the full breadth of the subject with not just understanding the disorder today, but it's documented beginnings as well. However, as you yourself states, it might be difficult to get the adequate amount of literature needed to do justice by your added sub-heading and have it fall into line with the rest of the subheadings within the article. That being said, I do think it is doable, if you want to continue and I don't want to discourage you, the "Screening" subheading for instance is to the point and can stand as an example for sort of the bare minimum of information you'd need tp create an entirely new addition to the formation of the article.

Besides your possible formatting choices, I think you've done a great job with adding pertinent information and clearing up any possible instances for confusion (I'm talking about your addition to the "Diagnosis" section here). Furthermore, it is a tricky line to walk with talking about differing ideas of information and do so without showing any biases and you did a great job with that with your adage about antidepressants. I also agree with your decision to amend the statement on cannabis users, your changes inserted the neutrality it needed.

I went through your references and they all seem to be up to date, credible, and unbiased so good job on that. However, one issue did come up with your first citation, it seems that there is an issue the formatting of the date, but it looks like an easy fix. I'm pretty sure I had the same issue, and there is an early exercise that goes over correcting date issues pretty briefly, I think that could help and then you'll be good to go.