User:Afosorno/Tyler Mitchell (photographer)/Adriel824 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?  Afosorno's article on Tyler Mitchell (Photographer).
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Afosorno/Tyler Mitchell (photographer)

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The lead is not updated but in my opinion, it doesn't need to be.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes it does the perfect job of introducing the topic, in this case the lead consists of the persons name, occupation, place and date of birth.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? This is something I would quickly add also something I need to add to mine.

Content
There has indeed been more content added to each different subject of the article. There were new details about his early life such as the fact he published a book at the age of 20. Not only does article have more content but it is also more organized due to the internal and external links that were added. I would suggest adding more background info that is detailed so maybe why Tyler became fascinated by photographer.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? The new content is completely neutral and reliable as proven by the citations and links provided.

Sources and References
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 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? All new information is reliable. The sources consist of different publications and magazines which are perfect sources for a topic like this. Also, all links work just fine.

Organization
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 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? New content is well written and concise. Overall, the article is well organized.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

No new media was added.