User:Agchick/sandbox

Here are my notes for the COML 509 assignment due June 8. ARTICLE TO IMPROVE: Hala Gorani

'''Write a few sentences about what you plan to contribute to the selected article. Check out the Talk page, too, to see what other Wikipedians are already contributing.''' Given my review of the article and the notes on the Talk page, I plan on adding a photo (or more) to the article. The previous editor improved the page quite a bit, so I will build on his work. This article is of interest to a WikiProject about Seattle, so I'd like to see if I can find any more information about Hala Gorani's time in Seattle.

'''Think back to how to evaluate an article. Look at the article's content, tone, and sourcing.'''


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Yes. Are some areas under or over-developed? The personal life area seems underdeveloped relative to the career section.
 * Is it written neutrally? Yes
 * Does each claim have a citation? Yes Are the citations reliable? Yes

'''What can you add? Consider posting some of your ideas to the article's Talk page.'''

I can watch and study this video on Youtube https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C5B3gUzAbIE Hala Gorani's 2015 Commencement Address at George Mason University to look for additional content and hints for other leads.

I also found some leads in this article that will allow for additional development in the awards area https://www.aaiusa.org/together_we_came_hala_gorani

There are not many articles available in common searches, I will need to spend some time using the Gonzaga library sources. I can certainly provide some external links as well.