User:Ageorgescu1698/Cannabis and sex/Srehman07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ageorgescu1698


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ageorgescu1698/Cannabis_and_sex?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cannabis and sex

Evaluate the drafted changes
Considering that you are still working on the article, my first suggestion would be to remember to add on to the lead section of the article as you see fit and to keep it concise yet include the details that you feel are important so that you can preview your topic. The main section that you have added so far is the Influence of Cannabis, and the content that you have included in this section is relevant and makes sense to include in the article. I think something that might help supplement the reader’s understanding of the effects of THC could be to include more about how the chemical message in the nervous system is sent or the role of neurotransmitters (such as dopamine) It might be useful to expand more or walk through the endocannabinoid system that you mentioned as this would help the user understand specifically what path THC takes through the brain and how if affects different brain structures. Understanding the effects on brain structures would then help the reader understand how THC’s influence is produced. Other than that, I can see that you are working on sections on sexual pleasure and memory as well. I think including these sections is a great idea as they are relevant to your article. Overall, what you have so far looks well written to me. I think that you chose a very interesting topic and you also have a good start on your edits, so I look forward to reading the final result!