User:AggieGM/Women in Islam/Niese05 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AggieGM


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AggieGM/Women in Islam (draft is not present)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women in Islam

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello AggieGM.

Here is my peer review:

Lead


 * No the lead has no been updated to reflect the new content added.
 * No the Lead does not include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * No the lead does not include a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * No the Lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * There is no lead provided at the time of peer review.

Content


 * No content was added to the article.

Tone and Balance


 * Editor has not made any changes.

Sources


 * No sources were listed for this article.

Organization


 * No content is written by the editor

Images and Media


 * There are no forms of images or media added in by the editor.

Overall Impressions


 * As of now there is no content added to the article. There is no changes to the original article.
 * The first step in improvement would be to start making changes and editing your article.

Additional Feedback: While editing a Wikipedia article for a project is really intimidating, I'm sure you can do it! Once you start, I'm sure you'll provide information of significance to the article! I wish you luck. Niese05 (talk) 04:12, 24 October 2022 (UTC)