User:Agonnella/Mary Beaumont Welch/Annatardecilla Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Agonnella/Mary Beaumont Welch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Agonnella/Mary Beaumont Welch


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mary Beaumont Welch

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe that all of the content is relevant to who Mary Beaumont Welch is and has more facts about her. The first sentence to the "Legacy" section does a good job in giving a brief description of the rest of the paragraph. The sources seem to be reliable but they are a little old. Although, I doubt there was many articles that were more up to date. The edits are easy to read and follow and would be a good addition to the original article. As for grammar, I would add a comma after "At Iowa State". Overall, I believe that the edits look good.