User:Agonnella/Mary Beaumont Welch/Lwendell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Agonnella


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Agonnella/Mary_Beaumont_Welch?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mary Beaumont Welch
 * Mary Beaumont Welch

Evaluate the drafted changes
While reviewing the sandbox draft for Agonnella, I noticed that some of the in-text citations have not been liked properly to the references down at the bottom. Before adding more information, it might be helpful to go back and link those before moving on so they don't get forgotten down the road. There is also a portion in the sandbox that is tilted "bibliography" that includes some of the exact same information from the original article's biography section. I am not sure if it was intentional or not but it could probably be looked over again as well. There is a newly added section that has been added and it is titled "Legacy at Iowa State University". The original article does not contain any of the information that was provided within the newer section and it really helps reiterate the important role Mary Beaumont Welch played at Iowa State University. Overall, the newly added section helps to provided a clearer image of who Mary was and keeps a neutral tone throughout.