User:Agraceb09/Charlene Carruthers/Jsanderson31 Peer Review

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Agraceb09


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 * Charlene Carruthers
 * Charlene Carruthers

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the article stays on the topic of Charlene Carruthers and her accomplishments in a neutral format. The links all work, however I think some media could be added to improve the page. The page seems a bit unbalanced, and if anything could be added to the results of her actions within the police brutality sections of the page, I think it would be both more balanced and informative. Some of the cited information comes from sources like magazines that tend to be biased or unreliable, however, in the context of an activist and her impact on our society today. I also think that there could be more background information such as a paragraph on Carruthers' education and life leading up to her activism!