User:Agraceb09/Charlene Carruthers/Livia.nelson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Agraceb09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Agraceb09/Charlene Carruthers
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is informative but it doesn't really tell us who Charlene is. The article, it's self isn't extremely engaging. I wonder if it could use some more highlights to bring attention to her accomplishments. The Police Brutality section is very short and there is much that can be added to make it a more important part of the page. This page has a lot of room for expansion and there could be more detail overall. There are a lot of references, but the article doesn't quite reflect all the information out there.