User:Agreeves/Genetics of post-traumatic stress disorder/Mewallac Peer Review

General info
Agreeves
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Agreeves/Genetics_of_post-traumatic_stress_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Genetics of post-traumatic stress disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the inclusion of comorbid disorders commonly seen in PTSD. I also like the inclusion of the genetic variance that occurs between these disorders. I think that the information is a little unorganized. It seems as though each sentence jumps to a different topic. There is definitely great information there; it just needs to be strung together in a better way.