User:Agrewal246/Sex differences in psychology/Danielletjm2001 Peer Review

It looks like you chose a great part of the article to expand upon since it does not have a lot added to it by other Wikipedia contributors yet. Admittedly, it seems like a difficult piece to add to, but you're doing a great job so far. I don't know what all you are planning to edit, so ignore me if I am going too far into the article, but it seems like the "Culture" section below "Neuroscience" does not have that much depth, so adding to there may be helpful, especially in the "Evolutionary product" section, which seems a bit confusing. I feel like there may be a way to add more to the last sentence of the "Evolutionary product" section, where psychological arguments and feminist critiques are mentioned.

I do also agree with Liz's comments, especially in regard to the final sentence in your Sandbox Draft and its placement within the article; it could definitely fit well within the sections of neurochemical differences.

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