User:Agrewal246/Sex differences in psychology/Zelki Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ashnoor Grewal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex differences in psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sandbox Draft: I like what you have added so far. Just make sure you spell check; I caught a couple of typos. I do agree with Dr. Rahn that the last sentence has more to do with neurochemicals, but I don't necessarily think you should throw it out. Maybe add the menstrual cycle part to the neurochemical section, and mention that certain neurochemicals may have more to do with perceived neurological differences than the actual anatomy of the brain in the neurology section.

Overall: I generally like how this article is written, so I think your biggest task is going to be citations. There were several places that need a citation or use an outdated one. I also urge you to focus on the "sex linkage" and "culture" sections as they are quite messy and are missing a lot of citations. The section on schizophrenia also only has one citation, so I would try to find at least one more.

Another editor has clearly already gone through the article and pointed out some errors, so I would look for those too. They covered most of the issues that I saw and I think it would be helpful to have an outsider perspective anyway. Good luck!