User:Agribaudo/Social media in education/Zzamgonzaga Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Agribaudo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Agribaudo/Social media in education
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Social media in education

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! You did a great job in adding language that added informed, research-based language to your article. I think that adding those words such as "in this study" helps the reader focus on the particular research study you are referring to. I liked how you also added the sentence that gives an alternative study on the topic. I think that this expands on the neutrality that these articles should contain.