User:Agt3j/The Dangers of Smoking in Bed/ZNThomas08 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Agt3j, Mpt3b, Jwill0226


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Agt3j/The_Dangers_of_Smoking_in_Bed?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article overall is very well structured. I like how the synopsis is structured, and the lead is great. If at all possible, however, I would like to see if there are more awards that the book or writer has won, but the structure looks great, and the book sounds very intriguing.