User:AguaCertamen!/Same-sex marriage in Spain/AltusLinguini Peer Review

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 * User:AguaCertamen!/Same-sex marriage in Spain
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Same-sex marriage in Spain:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

There doesn't appear to be a full lead at the moment. The article jumps directly into the political history of same-sex marriage in Spain.

Content:

Content seems up to date; data is provided until 2020. One could try to find more recent data from the past three years.

There doesn't seem to be mention of recent developments within the Catholic Church (with Pope Francis recently announcing somewhat reformed positions towards same-sex marriages). This could definitely be an area that could be talked about in the public opinion/religious performance section.

Organization:I really like the organization so far. I think it was a great idea to separate the "reactions" and "public opinion" sections. While these are related, having them separate allows the article to delve into greater detail about different political/religious groups sentiments, as well as data from the general Spanish public.

In general, I think the areas where the most work is needed is in updating the content to reflect changes in the Catholic Church.