User:AguaPika/Thermotoga petrophila/TVenvisci Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AquaPika


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AguaPika/Thermotoga petrophila
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Thermotoga petrophila
 * Thermotoga petrophila

Lead
Guiding Questions:

- The lead has been updated.

- It concisely introduces the topic.

- There is no brief description of the article's topics.

- The second sentence about where they are found is not mentioned in the article yet.

- Too concise, it could use more information.

Content
Guiding Questions:

- There isn't enough added content to tell.

Tone and Balance
Guiding Questions:

- Again, not enough content to be able to tell.

Sources and References
Guiding Questions:

- There are 2 cited sources, not properly cited. Please look at the citing training again, as is done in the lead section.

- Needs more sources (and recent ones too), most recent is from 2012.

Organization
Guiding Questions:

- Not enough content to tell.