User:Aguerrero427/African National Congress Women's League/Tayyy123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aguerrero427, TalhaTariqm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African National Congress Women's League
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African National Congress Women's League

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The introductory sentence clearly describes the topic. The lead includes information present in the article. The article deals with a historically underrepresented group. In terms of improvements, I think the lead section should be longer and it should include a brief description of the article's major sections. It should also mention women.

Content: The content is relevant to the topic. In terms of improvements, I would add information about the present day. This could be added under the history section.

Tone & Balance: The content is neutral. The claims do not seem biased.

Sources & References: The links in the references section work. The content backs up what the sources say. The sources are current. In terms of improvements, some facts are not backed up by citations. I would add more citations. Additionally, there should be more sources from different authors.

Organization: The content is easy to read. I do not see grammatical or spelling errors, but some parts could be edited for clarity. Additionally, you should add more sections.

Images & Media: Yes, there is an image that enhances understanding of the topic. The image has a heading, but not a caption.

Overall Impressions: Yes, the article is more complete with the new content. I like that the article has a picture already, and I am now going to add a picture to my article! I like how long the article is. In terms of improvements, "Black" should be capitalized. You should add the corresponding Wikipedia articles to the words "FEDTRAW," "NOW," and "UWCO" if they exist. I would also change the "Notables" section to say "Notable People." The most important thing to add to the article would be a subsection under "History" on the present day.