User:Ahmajorette/Ku Ponung/Tofu jail Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ahmajorette


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ahmajorette/Ku Ponung
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B5%AC%EB%B3%B8%EC%9B%85
 * https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B5%AC%EB%B3%B8%EC%9B%85

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your article does not seem to include a lead, however the early life/education and return to Korea section appears to be of important content. Perhaps you could add a section about Gu during his study abroad in Japan. Also, how does the fact that most of his paintings were lost or destroyed contributed to his legacy? Also, do you plan to talk more about the works or notable art exhibitions by Gu Ponung in a different section or part of his return to Korea? Overall, your content is neutral and does a good job in informing the reader about Gu as a modern artist and the topic of Korean-ness. Lastly, your citations are reliable and more finalized.