User:Ahmajorette/Ku Ponung/Zeezee7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ahmajorette)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ahmajorette/Ku_Ponung?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead

 * There is not Lead. If you include lead, a brief and detailed description of the artist, before his early life and education it would be easier for the reader to know what they are reading.

Content

 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, the content was relevant to the topic.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? I think there can be more content added to the draft, like you can have a different section about his paintings and art work. Also you can talk more about his career and what else he did after he graduated from the University.

Tone and Balance

 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, it is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I think the view point on his art work is underrepresented.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, it does not.

Sources and References

 * Unfortunately, there its no sources and references. Please add and cite them.

Organization

 * The contest can be more organized if it breaks down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic. For example, the artist paintings, carrier, late work and the legacy.


 * Also, The content is well written and it is easy to read however there are some grammatical issues in the article that can be fixed easily.

Images and Media
Guiding questions:


 * The article does not have an image for the topic. If you have a pic of the artist, that would be great.

Overall

 * It is a great start! The big concern is that this article is not supported by any sources. Also, please make sure to define the terms that are new and the reader do not know what they are.