User:Ahmorgan23/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Solar eclipse of May 29, 1919

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am interested in space and how the planets and other objects in space move. This article seems like it could use more information to describe the effects of this eclipse and the importance of it.

Evaluate the article
The initial overview of the eclipse could be expanded to better explain why the eclipse was so long, what the perigree is and why the moon was larger. It is missing a more in depth explanation. The visibility paragraph is very long and seems like it could be worded in a better way.

This article could be improved by expanding the sections that involve the type of eclipse this is. While there are some exterior pages to further look into the type of eclipse this is, it would be more efficient to give a summary of the types and what they mean.

Another addition to this article could include the importance of this eclipse. Why two expedition teams were sent out to study and evaluate this eclipse. What theories they were able to test and the findings from those. The importance of the eclipse during the time and what knowledge was gained.