User:Ahmyers10/Straight ally/Hannahazimi Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Andy Meyers (Ahmeyers10)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Ahmyers10/sandbox

Content

 * I think that the content here is well written and needed in the original article. The information is up to date, and strong sources were used. I learned quite a bit and it was easy to follow the information in the content created (the information was clear and concise).
 * It is important to address the levels of allyship, and this was done in a wonderful way in the new content.
 * The critique is also wonderful; it is important to address the problems with allyship!

Tone and Balance

 * The tone utilized was neutral, professional, and academic. Great job here!

Sources and References

 * The links I tried were working and the sources are reliable.

Organization

 * The content here was very organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs weren't too long and were easy to read.

Overall impressions

 * Andy, I am super impressed with what you have written here! The original article was sparse and did not have much information, and your contributions are both necessary and helpful to bring the complexity of this topic to light. Great job!