User:Ahnji

About me
I am a student and dancer who lives in Seoul, South Korea. I learned ballet, modern dance, gymnastics, and acrobatics, and majored in ballet among them. I spent most of my life doing ballet, and now I learn and practice ballet as a hobby, not as a major because of back and ankle injury. I am currently learning English and communication studies at a college in the United States. Except for ballet, my favorite hobby is going to the park with my dog. He is a lovely Miniature Pinscher, and I feel happy through the time that I spend with him.

My Wikipedia interests
If I active on Wikipedia in the future, I will probably edit information about dogs. I have been living with my dog for five years, and I'm a big fan of dogs. My life changed positively because of my dog, so I want to talk to people about the benefits of dogs to humans. What I want to accomplish as a volunteer on Wikipedia is that I hope more people will know the role and merits of dogs. Dogs bring positive mental and physical changes to people. Additionally, they help people feel less lonely and help thwart depression.

Article evaluation
I have been interested in Miniature Pinscher since 2015. I am a big fan of Miniature Pinscher because my dog is a Miniature Pinscher. I want to know more about Miniature Pinscher, so I often search for Miniature Pinscher on the Internet. A few days ago, I visited the Miniature Pinscher article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its lack of citations, its lack of contents, and its biased claims.

Completeness
The Miniature Pinscher page is missing some content. Most articles about dogs talk about dogs’ health, but there is no mention of this on the Miniature Pinscher page. I think it would be a good idea to add information about the average life span of the Miniature Pinscher and the diseases associated with them.

Biased voice
There is a biased claim on the page. According to the article, Miniature Pinschers are alert and wary of strangers. I think this is a preconception about them. I have seen many Miniature Pinschers, and they were usually friendly and were not wary of strangers. Even dogs of the same breed, they have different tendencies, so we should describe diverse tendencies about dogs.

Summary
Although there is some flaw on the page, I would rate this page favorably because I think some modifications will improve this article. To summarize the problems on the page, the reference provided on the page are unreliable because that is not linked to external sources, there is no information on the page regarding the health of the Miniature Pinscher, and there is biased information about their tendency.