User:Ahoog11/Cranchia scabra/JulesA27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ahoog11/Cranchia scabra
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cranchia scabra :

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * I think the lead should be a changed a bit to reflect more of the general information included in the article rather than specific information about the tubercles about the squid. Maybe the information about the tubercles should be its own separate section or go under an anatomy section.
 * Regarding citations, if the lead is supposed to be a general overview of what is in the article, then i think more citations should be used, possibly even a majority of the citations in a reference list.

Content


 * I appreciated the anatomical and physical descriptions about the squid I found them very interesting. However, I think it would be beneficial to add in some behavioral information if that is available.
 * It is clear that you included the most important/ most researched physical descriptions about the Cranchia scabra, which I think is essential for accurately describing the species

Tone and Balance


 * the authors keep a neutral tone regarding the organism, however I think they focus more on the physical qualities of the species rather than the whole
 * for instance, one thing that would contribute to a better understanding of the species would be information regarding its diet or where they are found in the sea.

Sources and References


 * I think 1 source was accidentally added twice

Clarke, Malcolm R. (1962-10). "Respiratory and Swimming Movements in the Cephalopod Cranchia Scabra". Nature. 196 (4852): 351–352. doi:10.1038/196351a0. ISSN 0028-0836. : Check date values in: |date= (help) Clarke, Malcolm R. (1962-10). "Respiratory and Swimming Movements in the Cephalopod Cranchia Scabra". Nature. 196 (4852): 351–352. doi:10.1038/196351a0. ISSN 1476-4687. : Check date values in: |date= (help)


 * Maybe try and find sources that are more recent as well, since the most recent was from 2018, which was more than 5 years ago.

Organization


 * As I stated before, most of the additions regard the anatomy of the squid. Maybe it would be a good idea to label all of the additions under a general anatomy section, and list each section appropriately
 * For example: first clarify the dorsal and ventral chambers more(like what body system is this a part of), then add in a tubercle section, and then add the movement and growth section.

Images and Media


 * I think another picture or video of Cranchia scabra would be useful to readers
 * If there are any videos available of the animal moving that would especially be useful in the movement section.

Overall Impressions


 * This is a great start to editing the page! The group has great information regarding the anatomy of the squid. Now I think the group can focus more on adding more information like habitat, diet, behavior or adaptions.