User:Ahussain36/Appalachian stereotypes/Rem00005 Peer Review

I like how you included a short part about the history of Appalachia because I think that could be helpful to people who may have never heard of Appalachia. I do see a lot of negative stereotypes, but I was just wondering if there are, if any, positive stereotypes. I think you did a good job of remaining neutral throughout the article. I could sense a little bit of thinking the stereotypes are wrong, which could come off as a little biased. You did do a really good job on citing your sources where they are needed. I think you could include a few pictures because usually Wikipedia articles include photos.

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