User:Aiapicco/Water conflict/JoshuaERS Peer Review

The questions relating to the lead are not relevant

The content is relevant to the topic of the environmental impact of water conflicts. For example, it touches on the impact of the 1980-1988 war in Iraq on Mesopotamian marshes. To improve the contribution some more content could be added that touches on the impact of this on wildlife, ecology, etc. All of the content seems to be up to date, based on when the citations were published.

The article appears to be written from a neutral point of view, presenting the events that are found in the sources.

The sources and references appear to be up to date and accurate. Some academic sources are used, though as always the addition of more may improve the quality of the article.

The article is well organized.

At the time of writing, there are a few errors in grammar or sentences that are unclear. For example: “ The US also sent more airstrikes around the Haditha reservoir to prevent ISIS from capturing another vital dam that could be sued to kill millions,” “ The conflict over the resource in the area caused both the Mosul and Haditha reservoirs to surface area at a rate of 2.0km2 a day,” “ brut down the surrounding towns.”

This article does not contain any images at the time of writing.

Overall, with a few small fixes, this contribution would improve the quality of the article. It adds content surrounding a relevant topic and its socio-environmental impact. Strengths include the topic, which is relevant to the article; the number of sources used; the relevant context provided; and the consideration of impacts on human health and wellbeing. Room for improvement includes fixes to grammar and the addition of more content about the environmental impact of these events.