User:AidanCOMM2311/Social network advertising/SharmaPrachi12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AidanComm2311


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AidanCOMM2311/Social network advertising
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social network advertising

Evaluate the drafted changes
Aidan added a section about the strategy of Consumer to consumer marketing. They also choose to add a Disadvantages section describing the shortcomings commonly associated with Social Network Advertising. In my opinion, the content they choose to draft is highly relevant. Also, the vocabulary used is simple and straightforward. They have included some references in the Choose an article sandbox but have not formally done so in their main draft yet.

While going through the original article, I noticed that the section regarding Snapchat seems to be lacking, when compared to the other ones. More information about the kinds of advertisements one is bombarded with, while browsing through the app can be included under this section.

Overall, the drafted content definitely enriches and adds to the original article.