User:AidanLewis7/Ruth Gipps/Kjmeyer01 Peer Review

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AidanLewis7
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This article looks to be in pretty good shape so I am curious on the changes you are looking at making. In reviewing the existing article I notice that maybe some performance history before her injury is lacking. Also the section on discrimination is fascinating. I wonder if this could be a good section to expand as well as possibly linking other pages on women in music or discrimination into this article. Something I am doing with my article is putting links to it in other Wikipedia pages. For this article, it might be significant to link it into women in music, women composers, or just composers in general pages.