User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing plague of 1518/Abbigale Gonda Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Aidanmjordan)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing_plague_of_1518?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading your article. I thought it meat a lot of the criteria. The few things I would change though is I would put where it took place because just the town name is very vague and I'm not sure where it is at. Another thing I would change is a few spelling mistakes like forgetting a T in the. I definitely feel like it needs more detail but I know it is super hard to find information about this topic but I thought the sources you did have were good. The only other thing i would add is some pictures of some sort that relate to make it a little more eye catching. I thought the viewpoints were represented well and were pretty unbiased. Other then that I enjoyed reading your post and keep up the good work!