User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing plague of 1518/Karsenpierce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aidanmjordan, Jesmul2022, Ry.skiles


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing_plague_of_1518?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dancing plague of 1518
 * Dancing plague of 1518

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hey everyone. Everything you have added so far pertains to the topic and flows nicely. Since the article already has a good amount of content and sources, I would start by editing those. Make sure every source is reliable, and if it's not, find new ones. I think some of the current article has repetitive information so maybe to to condense that. I think adding a picture of what the dancing plague would also be nice to add. Hope this helps and good luck with the rest!