User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing plague of 1518/Nyankonyan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Aidanmjordan, User:Jesmul2022, User:Ry.skiles


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aidanmjordan/Dancing_plague_of_1518?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dancing plague of 1518

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, you guys have added some nice details to the information that is already available. I find it especially helpful that you were able to find the name of the woman who was first observed dancing. My main suggestion would be to make sure you're marking your in-text citations as you go, so that they are shown in order at the bottom of the article. One more edit would be to check for typos such as missing or double spaces. Other than that, you guys are making great progress, and I look forward to seeing your final draft!