User:Aidanpatrick

My name is Aidan and I work at Interbay Golf Course in Seattle, and my favorite golfer is Tiger Woods. I am a full time student at the University of Washington Bothell and my intended major is advertising in communications.

Possible articles to research
Titleist

This page is a quality one to edit because the golf brand Titleist itself is widely known. The information on this page is not up to date; the models of clubs themselves are last years models instead of the current models the tour players are playing.

Titleist 915 Driver

This would be an interesting Wikipedia page to create because there is so much technology involved in the driver head that it deserves to be talked about. Not to mention all the different shaft options that are available. Plus there are so many players on the PGA Tour that play this club that it would be a great page to create.

Scotty Cameron

There is a page for arguably the most famous club maker in the current sport of golf but it is not as I would have expected. There is no picture of Scotty Cameron himself as well as no information about where he was born, how old he is… etc.

Bishop Blanchet High School

This page is a great one to edit because first of all the information is not up to date as it could be. Also there are subjective statements, where a person favors a certain side. Plus some of this information may have been copied from the high school’s official home website.

Jake Lamb

Just from looking at this page I can tell that it needs to be edited more due to the lack of a picture and more personal information. Also there could be more information about his days playing college baseball, but other than that the information looks credible and safe.

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