User:Aiden Brown/Hipparion/Aml1251 Peer Review

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Aiden Brown
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Hipparion
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, it is really good! You added a lot more structure and information to the topic on the page that helped me gain a better understanding of the topic compared to the original piece. One thing that I would add would be some more images, since you do get pretty detailed with some of the concepts, adding some visual explanations might help the readers who aren't are as informed with those topics better understand. Another thing that might be cool to include is more on how it compares to the modern day horse - since it is mentioned that they are similar in appearance but potentially not in DNA (is it an ancestor?) and some might get confused over their relationship to each other. While I'm not sure how much is known about the hipparion, including maybe what their habitat/diet was like and the theories of how they went extinct could add a little more length to the article as well. Other than that, you keep a pretty neutral tone and your citations look awesome.