User:Aideng427/Steelhead/Danikimmy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * aideng427


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Steelhead&diff=1183037884&oldid=1170152822:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like how you were descriptive. One thing I would change though is how you actually used numbers, instead I would spell out the numbers to make it more formal. You also stated, "By the late 80s..." I would had a " ' ," between the 80 and the s. That is if you don't take my advice and keep the numbers as numbers. I checked your links and all of them work. Good job. Your information seems that it is taken from a reliable source. So the only thing I would change is making it a little more formal, just so when people are reading it, they can tell it is very good information to take from.