User:Aideng427/Steelhead/Tmx5027 Peer Review

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Aideng427
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Steelhead
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Steelhead

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft introduce useful informations about steelhead, but I think you can make 2 paragraphs instead of one. You can divide it in the place where introduce the history of Steelhead in Great Lake.

Every information you introduce isn't bias or try to persuade something to readers, but I think you can be specific in this part " States such as New York, Ohio, and Pennsylvania to name a few. " It would be better, if you list all of the specific states, which would be more informative to readers.